Cool Breeze
I sit
Clavicle square to open window
Cool breeze fondles shoulders
Hair tickles nape
Eyelids fall shy
Cool breeze seduces
Sigh
* * *
Clavicle square to open window
Cool breeze fondles shoulders
Hair tickles nape
Eyelids fall shy
Cool breeze seduces
Sigh
* * *
posted by Jonas | 6/30/2011 12:19:00 AM
6 Comments:
It's nice when you can take a moment to be seduced by a breeze.
Hope your summer is going well.
Lovely, Jonas. I can almost feel that breeze myself.
Lovely summer poem. It's that kind of day here too, you've put it in words.
Who comes on the breeze
brings the blush
below
lashes fluttering
two homing beacons
calling one heart
*sigh* the perfect ending.
I love the feel of a cool breeze through the window. (This is an image my ovaries can get behind.)
Thank you, Yvonne! My summer, so far, ranks a bit better than (recent) most. The closer I come to living as a wide-eyed child, the better the summer becomes.
We all need breezes like that, Patti, yes?
Thank you, June. Funny thing, I actually remember several delightful breezes dating all the way back to early youth. But I struggle to remember my (current) telephone number.
Is this poesy yours, Annie? Charming.
I'm smiling, Ms. Covert Operative. All the windows (and patio door) have been flung wide open this evening to give teasing breezes free rein. It's a primal thing.
Post a Comment
<< Home