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Thursday, June 30, 2011

Cool Breeze

I sit

Clavicle square to open window

Cool breeze fondles shoulders

Hair tickles nape

Eyelids fall shy

Cool breeze seduces


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Blogger Yvonne Osborne said...

It's nice when you can take a moment to be seduced by a breeze.
Hope your summer is going well.

Thu Jun 30, 09:12:00 AM  
Blogger PattiKen said...

Lovely, Jonas. I can almost feel that breeze myself.

Thu Jun 30, 09:37:00 AM  
Blogger June Calender said...

Lovely summer poem. It's that kind of day here too, you've put it in words.

Thu Jun 30, 09:52:00 AM  
Blogger Wine and Words said...

Who comes on the breeze
brings the blush
lashes fluttering
two homing beacons
calling one heart

*sigh* the perfect ending.

Thu Jun 30, 12:15:00 PM  
Blogger secret agent woman said...

I love the feel of a cool breeze through the window. (This is an image my ovaries can get behind.)

Sun Jul 03, 05:35:00 PM  
Blogger Jonas said...

Thank you, Yvonne! My summer, so far, ranks a bit better than (recent) most. The closer I come to living as a wide-eyed child, the better the summer becomes.

We all need breezes like that, Patti, yes?

Thank you, June. Funny thing, I actually remember several delightful breezes dating all the way back to early youth. But I struggle to remember my (current) telephone number.

Is this poesy yours, Annie? Charming.

I'm smiling, Ms. Covert Operative. All the windows (and patio door) have been flung wide open this evening to give teasing breezes free rein. It's a primal thing.

Fri Jul 08, 10:19:00 PM  

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