A Tear
If all it took were a tear or two
(no matter how bloody)
I’d be redeemed
If all it took were a razor across a wrist
I’d find peace at last
But it takes more
Lots more
Than tears, razors, glass shards
or evisceration
To redeem a soul
* * *
(no matter how bloody)
I’d be redeemed
If all it took were a razor across a wrist
I’d find peace at last
But it takes more
Lots more
Than tears, razors, glass shards
or evisceration
To redeem a soul
* * *
posted by Jonas | 4/02/2011 12:02:00 AM
4 Comments:
I don't believe a soul needs to be redeemed. We carry both within us, within our soul, the capacity for both good and evil. The capacity that we have to do evil exists because it gives us the chance to choose. And no, we don't always choose so good but we do learn.
We are all of us, works in progress Jonas.
And I don't believe you need redemption. I "feel" no evil.
Despite the kind commentary, I continue to seek redemption.
redemption is yours once you let the past go
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